Monday, January 26, 2009

"Self-Consciously"


"Good evening,How are you?"
"Fine,thank you", were the only words we exchanged.
Then,side by side,we started walking.....feeling uneasy. Both were aware of the uncomfortable silence... We stopped,smiled...awkwardly... apologetically... blushed red... groped for words. But to no avail.
With beads of perspiration on our heads...
We walked on and on self-consciously......



Just something I wrote long back..this has been really close to my heart....

16 comments:

peter said...

nice lines ..and close to heart huh ?
personal experiences? any ?

Anonymous said...

verrryyyy nice !! :))

PS: got the coolest word verification ever - endamat.

Arv said...

I dont know if you wrote it out of experience... but It had happened to me and it was not much different from what you wrote...

beautiful :)

take care... cheers...

puneet said...

Thats really nice kind of experience.its good also experience it.

Mayuri said...

@peter-thank u.. :) havent exactly had this kind of an experience,but kno 2 ppl who are very close to me to have been in the above situation..so... :)

@hp-thanks!!! u must b knowing the meaning of it as well,considering ur CAt prep..!!(lol...pj i kno!)

Mayuri said...

@arv-like i told peter,not my personal experience..but im sure if something like this ever happens,its gonna be even more beautiful..thanku!:):)


@puneet-thanx :)

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Arjun said...

nice words.. :)
Kind of relateable.. ;)

Cheers..!!
Arjun

Trinaa said...

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...can definitely relate to this!!

Allen's Grey Matter Inc. © 200...whatever !! said...

oh..!!
lovely dear..!

remainds me of a song from the 1960s

"Sound of Silence"

Mayuri said...

@arjun-thank u!!"relaetable"hmmmm... ;p

@tinni-thanku..m learning from you!!


@allen-thanks :)

Anonymous said...

walked side by side?

:)
thanks for hopping to my page..

do come for nutty stuff

Mayuri said...

@chriz-yeah..absolutely!

Anonymous said...

why ?

Mayuri said...

@naman amin-y wat??

HP said...

new post to karo !